WWW: - Some good ideas within your plot - Good use of software used to present your ideas
EBI: - Some parts of your plot here do not make sense and are different from your initial ideas. They need to be made much more clear - How are you going to link the hand print to the janitor? How do we understand that there is a woman in the shed? If the rebel character starts by seeming troublesome why are you then presenting them to be the opposite? - You were supposed to consistently talk your role within the group in every box underneath the caption. You should be making comments on different shots and camera angles in all boxes
WWW:
ReplyDelete- Some good ideas within your plot
- Good use of software used to present your ideas
EBI:
- Some parts of your plot here do not make sense and are different from your initial ideas. They need to be made much more clear - How are you going to link the hand print to the janitor? How do we understand that there is a woman in the shed? If the rebel character starts by seeming troublesome why are you then presenting them to be the opposite?
- You were supposed to consistently talk your role within the group in every box underneath the caption. You should be making comments on different shots and camera angles in all boxes